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New section... old site
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 4:58 pm
by Luke
I've already had people critique this site, but my company has since acquired a website that is used FREQUENTLY by people in town and we would like to merge it into our site to utilize the traffic for our benefit. I think I've done an OK job of doing so, but it seems a little cluttered. Whaddya think?
http://paradisedirect.com/otr_index.php
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 5:27 pm
by RobertGonzalez
It doesn't look that cluttered. It might be better layed in terms of the content. Maybe making the bolded text a heading and have the relevent content below it. But it seemd to flow pretty well. It also has most of what you want your users to see right up front and center so it gets its message across rather efficiently.
The imaged links on the header "ParadiseDirect" image might be better served as text, but even the way they are now is OK. As a first time user, the thing that my eyes go to the most are the blue cell buttons just under the header image.