Could someone pop in and take a read at this tutorial I wrote: Embedding YouTube videos. It's meant to be for people who use my library but it could definitely be adapted elsewhere.
Comments on spelling and grammar are good, so are comments on readability and understandability.
A little tutorial I wrote...
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This does not read all that smooth to me. You might want to consider pretty-ing it up a bit. And I think you need an 'are' are the there.Last sentence, Paragraph 2 wrote:Allowing users to tell the browser to load content from other websites is intrinsically dangerous: there already security risks associated with letting users include images from other sites!
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