I wrote this poem a little while back. I call it "Eupho
Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 11:37 pm
I wrote this poem and I was hoping somebody could give me some feedback and let me know what you think. I'm going to try and turn it into a song and my roommate and I will record it and then I'll probably post it on here for you guys to hear (he's a drummer, I'm trying to be a singer, and we have a guitarist). Anyway, I hope you enjoy it.
Luke wrote: I am a feather at the mercy of a candid wind
yearning oblivion, I follow the path of those who lead
mind wandering back to a place where I feel at peace
knowing it will never come
euphoric is my naivety
euphoric is my complacency
I am a sheep on the path of a sheppard
seeking truth, I find only deceit
body dragged against my will
I must break free or find annihilation before enlightenment
euphoric is my naivety
euphoric is my complacency
I am not yet what I will become
picking up the pieces, I see the whole
soul not yet seen by others, let alone myself
I know this path leads somewhere
euphoric is my need to be seen